Poetic Freestyle
A fellow scriber such as myself had a status posted on Facebook and I decided to reply to what he posted.
They said " B. You need to stop bashing these dudes"
I said " Hell No! Ima keep thrashing these fools!" until they wake up & smell the folgers, Until I turn u grown ass BOYS into soldiers, and punch out the cobra's, Cause the problem's u men in fact.... Yall big ass babies YALL SHOULD GOGGLE A BOTTLE OF SIMILAC! Instead of tryna be the man, Yall should grow the Fu** up and be a man!!" - Basiyr Abdul Shahiyd
He is a very good writer that chooses to write about things that matter in real life. Subjects about taking care of things that mean so much more then the bs we worry about on a daily basis. So you know I had to piggy back off of what was said & this is something short & simple but says alot .
My response:
( People always confuse hate/trashin with TRUTH, the truth can & will hurt but you cant deny FACTS ! )
Don’t let these fools distract you from proving what you want to prove truth be told you throw them through a loop – you're just bold .
Everyone is expectin your best and when you give it they neglect to see this is what they asked for , this is what they wanted , so no need to hit the brake push the gas pedal harder – GUN IT ! The act of writing excites me especially when it’s real life shit because we tend to hide from it pretending things don’t exist but I must persist – continue with this writin ish !
If acts of expression through scribes is your goal then do it & if they don’t like it tell em to dig a hole !
They said " B. You need to stop bashing these dudes"
I said " Hell No! Ima keep thrashing these fools!" until they wake up & smell the folgers, Until I turn u grown ass BOYS into soldiers, and punch out the cobra's, Cause the problem's u men in fact.... Yall big ass babies YALL SHOULD GOGGLE A BOTTLE OF SIMILAC! Instead of tryna be the man, Yall should grow the Fu** up and be a man!!" - Basiyr Abdul Shahiyd
He is a very good writer that chooses to write about things that matter in real life. Subjects about taking care of things that mean so much more then the bs we worry about on a daily basis. So you know I had to piggy back off of what was said & this is something short & simple but says alot .
My response:
( People always confuse hate/trashin with TRUTH, the truth can & will hurt but you cant deny FACTS ! )
Don’t let these fools distract you from proving what you want to prove truth be told you throw them through a loop – you're just bold .
Everyone is expectin your best and when you give it they neglect to see this is what they asked for , this is what they wanted , so no need to hit the brake push the gas pedal harder – GUN IT ! The act of writing excites me especially when it’s real life shit because we tend to hide from it pretending things don’t exist but I must persist – continue with this writin ish !
If acts of expression through scribes is your goal then do it & if they don’t like it tell em to dig a hole !
thanks for reading !
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If you would like to check out more of Basiyr's work click the link below !
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Commens/feedback/topic suggestions always appreciated! You can post on here with your name or anonymously or email me at: peaches.monae@gmail.com.
Some comments may be used in future posts. If you do not want your name to be used please let me know.
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